Upload the script that you wrote based on a scenario from the “This I Believe” essay titled “I Believe in the Beatles.” Be sure to include a character list and properly formatted stage directions and dialogue.
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English is my Thinglish :: 
Jennifer Antonio Ojeda English 8 : 3,4
6 / 11 / 15 This I believe
Characters We were really scared when Phoebe took off but -Phoebe hoped she’d come back.
-Dad
-Macklin
Macklin- I wonder where Phoebe is.
Dad- Don’t worry honey, she’s going to come back.
Macklin- But dad how are you sure she’s coming back?
Dad- Well Phoebe knows where she belongs.
I believe that people should be there self’s.when I realize I could be anything I wanted to be.This is the event I am describing today. It happened when I was twelve years of age.I had a small family that was very good in school.————
I was at home and my step mom was doing school on the computer when she got her masters degree.my step mom and dad where involved in this event.I closed my eyes and pictured my self on that day.when I think back on that day It makes me feel happy that she is good in school to teach me.
Also I think of what to be when I grow up and be proud inside.I would want to tell you that I was very bad in school. I thought that I couldn’t be anything I wanted to be.Now,I know that if you put your mind to it, you can be what ever you want to be.Because I had some rough times in school at the age of 11.
Some values that were important to me back then were important are respect, love,leadership, compassion,and integrity.
some values that are important to me now are respect,skill,knowledge,leadership,and success.
These values will help you succeed in life and in school as well.this is my event that I believe is a great tip to help you achieve good in life .tell me what you think about my essay on the comment section in the blog .
Since there is no header, I am not sure whose this is! I would like to know more about your belief that people should be themselves. You seem to be discussing a little about about a lot of beliefs, rather than a giving uyour audience a lot of info about one belief. Please reorganize, and give more details on your belief. See me for more detailed assistance. Also, grammar, punctuation, need work! [60]
Perhaps examples of people not being themselves and then changing would make your belief more evident. Also, the punctuation and spelling need some work! [60]
My I Believe Essay
By: Lateece Cherry
I believe that people should be there self’s. when I realize I could be anything I wanted to be. This is the event I am describing today. It happened when I was twelve years of age. I had a small family that was very good in school.————I was at home and my step mom was doing school on the computer when she got her masters degree.my step mom and dad where involved in this event. I closed my eyes and pictured my. self on that day. when I think back on that day It makes me feel happy that she is good in school to teach me. I think of what to be when I grow up and be proud inside. I would want to tell you that I was very bad in school. I thought that I couldn’t be anything I wanted to be. Now, I know that if you put your mind to it, you can be what ever you want to be. Because I had some rough times in school at the age of 11.Some values that were important to me back then were important are respect, love, leadership, compassion, and integrity. some values that are important to me now are respect, skill, knowledge, leadership, and success. These values will help you succeed in life and in school as well. this is my event that I believe is a great tip to help you achieve good in life .tell me what you think about my essay on the comment section in the blog.