My journey to school

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Review your journal’s table of contents.  Find the entry where you wrote a description of your journey to school.  In Google Docs, transcribe (type) your description.  Make sure your description of your journey to school is rich in imagery:  sights, smells, feelings, tastes, etc.

Check over your work for grammar, punctuation and spelling.  Notice the word count, and add that to the end of your description.  For example, in parentheses: [(200 words)].

Then copy your typewritten description and paste it into the comments section.  Enter your identifiation.

Argumentative Essay :: “Reality TV” :: Introduction paragraph

realitytv

Review your journal’s table of contents.  Find your introductory paragraph on “Reality TV.”  The introduction contains the claim; three reasons or three sets of evidence, or two reasons and a counterclaim; and a conclusion.

In Google Docs, type the class header at the top of the page, then type your Reality TV paragraph.

(The class header has your first and last name at the left side of line 1, and  your Class at the right side of line 1.  On line two, at the left margin, type the date, and at the right margin, the assignment:  Introductory Paragraph.)

Check your paragraph for spelling, grammar and typing errors.  Color your text:  Red=intro paragraph; green=reason/evidence 1; blue=reason/evidence 2; orange=reason/evidence 3; red=conclusion.  Save your document [your name, your class, and a title like reality intro:  for example, dudley 707 realitytvintro

Copy and paste your paragraph into the comments section of this post.  Upload.

 

 

learned

What have you learned this year in your English class?   Which were your favorite assignments, activities, and/or projects? Your least favorite?

Transcribe your penultimate journal entry here.

How does the artist create horror in a visual image?

horror in art
In Roman mythology, the father of the Gods devours his children to ensure none becomes greater than him. Goya, a Spanish artist, painted this child murder on the wall of his house along with other gruesome paintings known collectively as “The Black Paintings.” Of the Black Paintings which Goya completed the other most famous work is probably his “Witches’ Sabbath.”

What may have been playing out in the aging artist’s mind? How does the artist create horror in this painting. Using the ICE strategy answer one of these questions in your writing joural

Bare-bones Outline

BAREBONES OUTLINE OF FIVE-PARAGRAPH ESSAY

  1. THESIS STATEMENT / CLAIM = Ricemshldnt be fired
  2. evidence of claim = his own busines
  3. evidence of claim = too harsh
  4. antithesis / counterclaim some say he deserves firing
  5. summary / conclusion to para I
  6. restatement of evidence A
  7. support evidence A
  8. support evidence A
  9. support evidence A
  10. summary / conclusion to para II

III.   restatement of evidence B

  1. support evidence B
  2. support evidence B
  3. support evidence B
  4. summary / conclusion to para III
  5. RETATEMENT of ANTITHESIS / COUNTERCLAIM
  6. support antithesis /counterclaim
  7. support antithesis /counterclaim
  8. support antithesis /counterclaim
  9. summary / conclusion to para IV
  10. CONCLUSION
  11. concluding statement
  12. concluding statement
  13. concluding statement
  14. summary / conclusion to essay

Poughkeepie Varsity Forfeits Game to Saugerties

POK team

Poughkeepsie Varsity Football

Should the Poughkeepsie High School football team forfeit its Friday game because of unsportsmanlike behavior following last Friday night’s game?

The superintendent announced the following:  “We deeply apologize to our parents, students, and our Poughkeepsie City School District community for the cancellation of the varsity football game scheduled for Friday, September 18, 2015. At this time, the varsity football team will forfeit the game due to concerns raised about “unsportsmanlike” behavior this past Friday, September 11, 2015 as the team was returning from an away game.”

Should the Poughkeepsie High School football team forfeit its game against Saugerties because of unsportsmanlike behavior?

Using the believing and doubting strategy, write a believing and then a doubting paragraph.  The class responses uploaded here may inform your draft argumentative essay.

Creating a writing community

diary

A community works best if all members agree on the rules, regulations and policies that will govern the proceedings in which all participate.  To this end, you were asked to think critically about the most equitable practices to introduce into our class to ensure that things run in an orderly yet engaging manner.

Please transcribe the rules you have composed to a word processing document..  Then save the document to your Google drive.  Copy and paste the content of our document here.  We will then read each others’ suggestions, and decide upon a constitution of sorts for our class.

Thank you.